In short
A structured critique moves from describing what's there to interpreting what it does, and only then to judging whether it works, relative to what it attempted. This keeps preference from replacing analysis, and it gives the maker something they can act on. You'll use it on your own work, on commercial fragrances and on other people's formulas. It builds on the evaluation sheet you used earlier.
What you will learn
- Apply a six-part framework to a composition
- Separate description, interpretation and judgment
- Give feedback that can be acted upon
Before this lesson: Finding a Signature
The six parts
| Part | Question | Evidence |
|---|---|---|
| 1. Intent | What is it trying to do, as stated or as you infer it? | Brief or concept; otherwise say "inferred" |
| 2. Structure | How is it built over time? Where's the weight? | A timed description |
| 3. Materials and character | What dominates? What's unusual? Is it faithful to its family? | Named impressions |
| 4. Evolution and transitions | Are handovers smooth? Is there a hole or a sudden drop? | Smelling at set times |
| 5. Execution | Is anything harsh, thin, muddy or unbalanced? Is it strong enough? | Tests; another nose |
| 6. Effect | Does it succeed at what it tried? Is that worth trying? | Your judgment, with reasons |
Three layers of statement
- Description: "At 15 minutes I smell lemon and a green note; at 2 hours, iris and musk." Others could check this.
- Interpretation: "The green seems to be there so that the lemon doesn't read as household cleaner." This is an argument.
- Judgment: "It doesn't quite work, because the transition at 40 minutes leaves a hole." This is an opinion with a reason.
Keep them separate on the page, and don't begin with a judgment, because you'll then only find evidence for it.
A sample critique of an invented composition
Intent: stated as a quiet, cool iris for day wear. Structure: a bright first 10 minutes, a slow iris heart, a long, clean musk base. Materials: iris-like and carroty, with a soft, woody edge. Evolution: a slight dip at about 30 minutes, as the citrus leaves before the iris is fully present. Execution: slightly sharp on first spray, and strength is low past 4 hours on strips. Effect: The idea reads clearly at 2 hours, and it is quiet as intended. I'd address the dip by adding a bridge of a low-volatility citrus or a small lift in the heart, and try it. It doesn't attempt much that's new, which suits the brief.
Critiquing yourself
You're the least reliable judge of your own work, because you know what you meant. To reduce that bias:
- Leave the piece for a week before you write.
- Use coded strips and a comparison piece.
- Write the description before opening your log.
- Ask someone to do a critique too, and read it after you've finished yours.
Giving criticism to others
- Ask what they want from it, and what stage it has reached.
- Start with their intent, and use your description to show what you perceived.
- Be specific about time and place: "at about 40 minutes."
- Offer tests, as well as verdicts: "Would a lower wood help? I'd try it."
- Separate taste from craft: "This family isn't for me, but the transition works."
- Be honest, because empty praise is no help.
Receiving it
Listen without defending yourself, ask for specifics, and record the person's own words. Then test it. A critic may be wrong about the fix and right about the problem. You need not follow every comment. You should be able to say why you didn't.
Practical exercise: Three written critiques
- Write a critique of one of your own compositions, following the bias precautions above.
- Write one of a commercial fragrance you admire, and be fair about its flaws.
- Exchange a formula on strips with a peer, without any ingredient list, and write a critique of theirs, offering it to them in a conversation.
- Reread your three critiques. Highlight description, interpretation and judgment in different ways. Do they appear in that order, with reasons?
You have done this well if a reader could check your descriptions, your judgments have reasons, and a maker could act on what you've written.
Common mistakes
- Using "I like it" as a conclusion. Give reasons.
- Judging a piece against a different goal. Check the intent first.
- Telling someone what to do with no reasoning. Show what you perceived.
Knowledge check
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